The Cockroach Squirm

[kolemath]

Mother taught me to dance
with her foot on my neck
and a bottle of poison
in her hand. great opening stanza, images and violence

You writhe limp towards the heels edge a also like the shift to 2nd person, which normally annoys me
as your spine is ground to a pulp free juice
that trickles fire in your mouth does the juice trickle fire? i'm not sure...is it the bottle that trickles?
and reddens your eyes. not as strong as the other images

I break it out at parties is break the best verb?
when heat strobes panic great image
in stilted patterns towards 
the heel edge
of a bottle. i liked heel's edge above (is this possessive) but it seems less consistent to say your heel is on the edge of a bottle, where as the heel's edge of a metaphorical cliff works nicely above, at least to my reading.. or maybe I'm missing something