10-27-2017, 01:01 PM
(10-27-2017, 12:00 PM)71degrees Wrote: It wasn’t the water sound—Enjoyed this 71. Excellent title. My only suggestion is to perhaps find a way of combining the first 2 lines. You could avoid a little repetition and one of the em dashes that way.
it wasn’t the river either.
It was a man—
pleased to be so
aimless.
Paul