Edit 2: Some thoughts on spring

Edit 2: Some thoughts on spring

Achebe Offline

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10-26-2017, 11:59 PM

This is beautiful, almost Walt Whitman like
“Spring is two steps forward and I am one step back” is fine poetry. It’s a pity you don’t do more with that beautiful, enigmatic line.
Great job

I’ll try and contribute something more substantial later if I can

~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

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Edit 2: Some thoughts on spring - by Lydish - 08-04-2017, 05:39 AM

RE: Some thoughts on spring - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-05-2017, 06:58 AM

RE: Some thoughts on spring - by Mbelcher - 08-11-2017, 12:09 AM

RE: Some thoughts on spring - by nibbed - 08-15-2017, 10:19 AM

RE: Some thoughts on spring - by alatos - 08-17-2017, 08:05 AM

RE: Some thoughts on spring - by Lydish - 10-24-2017, 09:05 PM

RE: Edit 1: Some thoughts on spring - by Knot - 10-25-2017, 02:37 AM

RE: Edit 1: Some thoughts on spring - by Lydish - 10-31-2017, 10:30 PM

RE: Edit 1: Some thoughts on spring - by Achebe - 10-26-2017, 11:59 PM

RE: Edit 2: Some thoughts on spring - by Knot - 10-31-2017, 11:47 PM

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