Second Edit: Wednesday Night Drunk

[Richard]

Hey Todd,
Thanks for the feedback. You gave me something to think about with the structure, and it's nice to hear this one is heading in the right direction.

Thanks again,
Richard

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Hey all,
Todd's suggestions get me thinking, so I made another edit. Feel free to let me know if it's an improvement.

naeshelle, I apologize that I missed your comments between doing this this edit and last. I have to agree with you that the original lacked clarity. I think it was one of those times when I knew what I meant, but didn't express it well enough because I got caught up in the emotion of the piece.

Thanks again,
Richard