Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5)

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Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5)

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10-21-2017, 01:58 PM

Thanks Richard, this is one of those poems that my meaning unfolds to me more and more as the critiques come in. Some things are plotted out, some like this one are written from feel and discovered in revision.

So, I took some good things from your comments. Thanks,

Best,

Todd

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by Todd - 10-19-2017, 06:48 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by abstractconstriction - 10-19-2017, 02:57 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 12:14 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by Knot - 10-20-2017, 01:01 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 02:39 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 03:06 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision) - by Knot - 10-20-2017, 03:27 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 03:59 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 05:54 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 2) - by Keith - 10-20-2017, 07:44 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 09:26 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 2) - by Richard - 10-20-2017, 01:35 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 3) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 02:09 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 3) - by Lizzie - 10-20-2017, 04:20 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 3) - by Knot - 10-20-2017, 09:52 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 3) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 10:46 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Knot - 10-20-2017, 11:45 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Todd - 10-21-2017, 12:52 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Lizzie - 10-21-2017, 01:07 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Todd - 10-21-2017, 01:26 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Richard - 10-21-2017, 12:08 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Todd - 10-21-2017, 01:58 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by vagabond - 10-21-2017, 04:34 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by Todd - 02-23-2018, 07:08 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by vagabond - 02-23-2018, 10:18 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by Richard - 02-27-2018, 08:48 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by Todd - 03-01-2018, 06:11 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by allisonkreid - 06-24-2018, 10:06 AM

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