Give / Take (II)

[Knot]

Hi abstract
I don't understand the layout, I'm afraid, so I'll leave that to others to comment on.

I like the opening, the repetition of 'attempting',
but I get lost on what kind of symbiotic relationship one might have with 'the dead' or 'bricks'.

Would suggest trimming S2 to;
but i can’t
get a tight enough grip
can’t revive what’s gone
[what] never existed
truthfully i can’t
find the crevices that
                                 fit

S3 reads like there are lines missing, I'm lost here.
though 'gardener's work', whatever this turns out to be, is intriguing.


Best, Knot.