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Give / Take (II)
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10-20-2017, 08:48 AM
I really enjoy the style that this is written in. The words that are clearly broken off adds a certain emotion that is hard to describe, but overall I believe effective. The lowercase sentences work well, the only thing is that I would consider maybe putting a period after you're ending a paragraph, just to give more of a halt between them.
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Give / Take (II) - by abstractconstriction - 10-20-2017, 03:27 AM
RE: Give / Take (II) - by DTaek3 - 10-20-2017, 08:48 AM
RE: Give / Take (II) - by Knot - 10-20-2017, 09:59 PM
RE: Give / Take (II) - by illya_v - 10-21-2017, 09:21 AM
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