Edit 1 - clear recurrence
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(10-18-2017, 12:56 PM)illya_v Wrote:  creek cascades down,
pooling and overflowing—
endless beginnings
You might consider "overflowing pools" or "overflow pooling", something to avoid the two "ing"s in a row.
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Edit 1 - clear recurrence - by illya_v - 10-18-2017, 12:56 PM
RE: clear recurrence - by Achebe - 10-18-2017, 01:14 PM
RE: clear recurrence - by Todd - 10-18-2017, 01:43 PM
RE: clear recurrence - by RiverNotch - 10-19-2017, 12:31 AM
RE: clear recurrence - by ellajam - 10-19-2017, 02:27 AM
RE: clear recurrence - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 03:10 AM



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