Delia

[ClaireLou]

This makes me think of my dog, Toby, who was my world, we climbed mountains together, he may have been small but he was big of heart, it was a very sad day when he left me.

A few little typo's but nothing drastic I would amend really.  Simple but with meaning.

It was not the brightest morning,
Not a day to play in the field,
You’re a bit sick, you’ll soon be healed,
Not to worry! just a warning.
 
Come to see you, all is so sad,
You wage your tail, yours eyes are bright,
Behind that spark I feel a fight,
Not to worry? I’m going mad.
 
You lay down, head in my hand,
Your velvet ear fits like a glove,
In one look can be so much love,
You’re so brave, should I take a stand?
 
I hate myself, still get a lick,
But stuck like a bear in a trap,
Tell you “Let’s take a little nap.”
And the vet played his dirty trick.