Edit 1 - clear recurrence

[Todd]

creek cascades down,
pooling and overflowing—
endless beginnings

Interesting poem, the title makes this less about the image and more about the metaphor.

It's a tight piece. I like the alliteration of the first two words but even though it isn't as much about the image (at least from my initial interpretation), I do like how you chose water which is clear and then put it in motion to maybe represent inspiration--a type of creative overflow. I also liked how you used the emdash to set off the final line.

Much enjoyed.

Best,

Todd