10-17-2017, 10:44 AM
Hi cloud,
I really enjoy the ambiguity and lack of punctuation throughout. It leaves interpretation very open. Anyone who reads it out loud is able to make the poem their own and leave the listener to find their own meaning. Potentially, making the title all lower case would add to the overall feeling of going against the grain.
Personally, I would like to see a version of this with punctuation, just to see where your mind takes it.
I really enjoy the ambiguity and lack of punctuation throughout. It leaves interpretation very open. Anyone who reads it out loud is able to make the poem their own and leave the listener to find their own meaning. Potentially, making the title all lower case would add to the overall feeling of going against the grain.
Personally, I would like to see a version of this with punctuation, just to see where your mind takes it.