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10-16-2017, 11:46 AM

Hey Lizzie,
Thanks for the feedback. As always, some of your comments gave me some much needed direction with where to go with the next edit. I was actually stuck for a bit on this today until reading some of your thoughts.

Thanks again,
Richard

Hey all,
I decided to play around with the wording and some of the images here. Feel free to let me know if it's an improvement or not.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

Time is the best editor.

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Second Edit: Growth - by Richard - 09-27-2017, 12:53 PM

RE: Growth - by dukealien - 09-27-2017, 10:59 PM

RE: Growth - by Richard - 09-28-2017, 08:16 AM

RE: Growth - by Youi - 09-28-2017, 01:59 PM

RE: Growth - by Richard - 09-29-2017, 11:00 AM

RE: First Edit: Growth - by Yjack123 - 10-02-2017, 12:45 AM

RE: First Edit: Growth - by Wastrel - 10-02-2017, 01:56 AM

RE: First Edit: Growth - by Richard - 10-02-2017, 02:43 AM

RE: First Edit: Growth - by Knot - 10-16-2017, 01:15 AM

RE: First Edit: Growth - by Richard - 10-16-2017, 02:02 AM

RE: First Edit: Growth - by Lizzie - 10-16-2017, 04:25 AM

RE: First Edit: Growth - by Richard - 10-16-2017, 11:46 AM

RE: Second Edit: Growth - by Todd - 10-16-2017, 01:08 PM

RE: Second Edit: Growth - by Knot - 10-16-2017, 09:34 PM

RE: Second Edit: Growth - by Richard - 10-17-2017, 11:33 AM

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