NaPoMo NZ Day 15 - unreliable narrator
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What year did you say it is?


I’d heard of the cave at Tunnel Burn,
its swirling waters, and the ferns, ‘cos I
work on a tunnel, six and a half miles
carved up from Deep Cove.

I went caving on my rostered day off,
Sunday, February 14, 1964,
wandered in and poked around,
followed an arm. Each time
it divided, I stayed right, entrance
by ferns and fungi, delicate,
trembling in the moist air
came across a bed of moss
inviting as a velvet couch
and stretched, to rest.

Such dreams!

When I woke up
my torch battery was flat,
my watch had stopped at 4.
I worried I’d be late for work,
and hurried back along the branches.
Met you in the main cave entrance.

You tell me a tour is due,
private viewing only.
Of course I don’t have a ticket.
Since when, did you say?

What year is it now?

A man’s asleep for fifty years
and the bloody Nationals are in again.
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NaPoMo NZ Day 15 - unreliable narrator - by just mercedes - 10-15-2017, 05:03 AM
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