Unboxing
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(10-12-2017, 03:54 PM)RiverNotch Wrote:  
(10-12-2017, 10:26 AM)just mercedes Wrote:  extended metaphor
RealDoll begs to differ.

Although I do agree that the tense of the last line is a bit off.

I read this as - N gets a new book from Amazon, and it's like getting a sex doll - his to violate, open, penetrate.
And both show signs of his invasion.

After you commented I tried to reread it unmetaphorically. But it still works as an extended metaphor, doesn't it? N gets a sex doll from Amazon, and it's like violating, opening and penetrating, a new book. And both show signs of his invasion.

It's because Amazon, for me, is only about books.  Hysterical
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Unboxing - by Wjames - 10-12-2017, 09:30 AM
RE: Unboxing - by just mercedes - 10-12-2017, 10:26 AM
RE: Unboxing - by RiverNotch - 10-12-2017, 03:54 PM
RE: Unboxing - by just mercedes - 10-12-2017, 04:15 PM
RE: Unboxing - by Keith - 10-13-2017, 01:54 AM
RE: Unboxing - by Wjames - 10-13-2017, 08:19 AM



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