10-10-2017, 08:08 AM
Really great topic and All successful people have a little OCD. I would say I love the smothering of the OCD and the Pillow Imagery. But I would like to see the same imagery come around over and over like someone who obsesses about something. My desk at work needs to be clean all the time. I finish something and I always have to come back to cleaning my desk before I can start a new project. This becomes like good comedy you bring the thought back over and over and this all times to what someone with OCD feels. Hope my rambling makes sense. I think you could humanize the piece a little more too.