10-09-2017, 03:13 AM
(08-21-2017, 10:14 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Here in the damp lightFor some reason this poem made me smile from hear-to-hear or ear-to-ear. This is probably because it allows the reader
of totality,
you are glowing, my dear.
to relate. Whereas larger works fill in too many blanks like why "my dear" is glowing....
good write.
Luna
In your own, each bone comes alive
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....
(Chris Martin)
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....
(Chris Martin)