I just thought loud was unnecessary--as screaming is by its nature loud. I think your intent came across. These are the things they tell themselves and each other to stay sane. Or it is simply their live and they adapt.
My horrific comment was from an outsider looking in.
I have no problem with the tone and perspective the poem spoke from.
My horrific comment was from an outsider looking in.
I have no problem with the tone and perspective the poem spoke from.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson