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NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes
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10-07-2017, 03:44 AM
@Todd, nice job, some powerful lines, I like the closing in tunnel sequence and the silent dinner. perhaps "just before the magician" rather than "and then" just a thought I know these are only rough drafts but this is already very good. Best Keith
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NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by just mercedes - 10-06-2017, 06:05 AM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by just mercedes - 10-06-2017, 10:30 AM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by Anna - 10-06-2017, 02:39 PM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by just mercedes - 10-06-2017, 03:44 PM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by Anna - 10-06-2017, 04:19 PM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by Keith - 10-06-2017, 08:57 PM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by Todd - 10-07-2017, 01:17 AM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by Keith - 10-07-2017, 03:44 AM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by Todd - 10-07-2017, 03:47 AM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by QDeathstar - 10-07-2017, 04:37 AM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by CRNDLSM - 10-07-2017, 07:06 AM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by Anna - 10-07-2017, 03:06 PM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by just mercedes - 10-07-2017, 07:18 AM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by kolemath - 10-08-2017, 07:50 PM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 6 - Ransom notes - by just mercedes - 10-09-2017, 04:48 AM
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