A Sense of Discomfort

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A Sense of Discomfort

I think the title should be consistent with the poem. Either use punctuation universally, or don't. 

man spits on the cringing world
he's seen nothing he can't understand
which has made him madder 
than what his mother made him This is starting to sound like a sexist rant becoming personal. I don't know if you mean to say man is now forgiving his mother or not.
putting him to bed
to a story of time's turning hand
molesting his mind insane
like asking a child questions
to answers he already knows

Personally I think this is too ambiguous to understand. I think if you connected the dots for us, maybe it could be more powerful to the audience!