10-03-2017, 09:22 PM
Overall I really enjoyed it. It spits you out & then draws you back in again, the title adding to the madness.
My only problem really was the lack of punctuation, I suppose I like poetry with direction as to how it flows whereas this method means you create the flow individually & I believe this aspect should be created by the writer.
My only problem really was the lack of punctuation, I suppose I like poetry with direction as to how it flows whereas this method means you create the flow individually & I believe this aspect should be created by the writer.