10-02-2017, 02:24 AM
It has a nice sweeping rhythm. I felt the current.
I was a little disappointed that the words had the sound of fiction. A tale told of a heroine who fell. But telling such a tale in just 13 lines cannot be ambiguous.
I was a little disappointed that the words had the sound of fiction. A tale told of a heroine who fell. But telling such a tale in just 13 lines cannot be ambiguous.