Second Edit: Growth

Second Edit: Growth

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10-02-2017, 12:45 AM

Yeah, overall I liked this. You have obviously put a lot of work into it. Smooth flow.
Not in love with "all encompassing" but I think the rest is fairly well polished. A bit of the prose. It won't change the world, but it's nicely done.

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Second Edit: Growth - by Richard - 09-27-2017, 12:53 PM

RE: Growth - by dukealien - 09-27-2017, 10:59 PM

RE: Growth - by Richard - 09-28-2017, 08:16 AM

RE: Growth - by Youi - 09-28-2017, 01:59 PM

RE: Growth - by Richard - 09-29-2017, 11:00 AM

RE: First Edit: Growth - by Yjack123 - 10-02-2017, 12:45 AM

RE: First Edit: Growth - by Wastrel - 10-02-2017, 01:56 AM

RE: First Edit: Growth - by Richard - 10-02-2017, 02:43 AM

RE: First Edit: Growth - by Knot - 10-16-2017, 01:15 AM

RE: First Edit: Growth - by Richard - 10-16-2017, 02:02 AM

RE: First Edit: Growth - by Lizzie - 10-16-2017, 04:25 AM

RE: First Edit: Growth - by Richard - 10-16-2017, 11:46 AM

RE: Second Edit: Growth - by Todd - 10-16-2017, 01:08 PM

RE: Second Edit: Growth - by Knot - 10-16-2017, 09:34 PM

RE: Second Edit: Growth - by Richard - 10-17-2017, 11:33 AM

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