09-30-2017, 09:42 AM
I have read all three iterations and liked all three separately for different qualities.
I think the third is the best for the music to it and the strangeness but it almost reads like a separate poem than the first which was already quite good.
The ending feels /just right/ - so right in fact that it is easy to miss the chronological dissonance of it.
Still, once you have caught it, it niggles at you until you can't ignore it,
I think the third is the best for the music to it and the strangeness but it almost reads like a separate poem than the first which was already quite good.
The ending feels /just right/ - so right in fact that it is easy to miss the chronological dissonance of it.
Still, once you have caught it, it niggles at you until you can't ignore it,