09-28-2017, 08:16 AM
Hey Duke,
Thanks for the feedback. I was a bit worried if the first and last line worked, so I'm happy to read what you had to say about them. There is definitely a certain level of suggestiveness intended, so no worries on that front.
I really appreciate some of your suggests about the rhythm, and I plan on using some of them in the first edit.
Thanks again,
Richard
Thanks for the feedback. I was a bit worried if the first and last line worked, so I'm happy to read what you had to say about them. There is definitely a certain level of suggestiveness intended, so no worries on that front.
I really appreciate some of your suggests about the rhythm, and I plan on using some of them in the first edit.
Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.