Version 2: You Need Me
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(09-27-2017, 06:49 AM)ClaireLou Wrote:  OMG my typing is terrible!  Thank you for your recommendations, I will look into it more tomorrow when my mind is focused & not just on sleep.  PS the secret was the title .... I know your secret, you need me ..... obviously it needs work lol
Darnit of course that was the secret. I can be slow sometimes lol but if you wanna work on that last line that's totally up to you, that part of my critique was just me.
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Version 2: You Need Me - by ClaireLou - 09-27-2017, 04:57 AM
RE: Version 1: You Need Me - by alonso ramoran - 09-27-2017, 05:38 AM
RE: Version 1: You Need Me - by ClaireLou - 09-27-2017, 06:49 AM
RE: Version 1: You Need Me - by alonso ramoran - 09-27-2017, 06:52 AM
RE: Version 1: You Need Me - by Keith - 09-27-2017, 07:38 AM
RE: Version 1: You Need Me - by Richard - 09-27-2017, 01:08 PM
RE: Version 1: You Need Me - by cloud - 09-27-2017, 04:21 PM
RE: Version 1: You Need Me - by nibbed - 09-28-2017, 06:25 AM
RE: Version 2: You Need Me - by ClaireLou - 09-29-2017, 09:00 PM



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