Trapped - Edit

[Todd]

Hey Duke, really liked the ideas behind this one.

Trapped



In half a drop of water clinging--like the image, I wonder though if there can actually be half a drop. Very good image to base the poem on though.
to a bowl’s rim in the sink
I thought I saw a spider
trapped and quivering.

It wasn’t that at all ~--great turn here.
just the world reflected
with my face.--solid last two lines

Much enjoyed,

Todd