09-20-2017, 09:03 PM
Hi 
Thank you for your comments they are appreciated as always.
Dukealien please do not worry, I take all opinions seriously but not in a bad way, I like to hear how people perceive what I have written. If you have an idea on an improvement always feel free to share, if you don't I cannot learn & I love to learn
I will have a look at the poem again later, when I've got my head around it. No excuses but the spelling etc bits are because I type quickly as the phrases come into my mind LOL & then I don't proof read .... very lazy .... it's a habit I need to get out of. I always put my first draft on the site so I can watch how it grows over time. I have a terrible tendency to write my poems really quickly & then just go from there. If I have to think to long & hard about the first attempt I figure that the flow is lost & it ends up being deleted!
I also need to get out of the habit of putting a capital letter at the start of each line when it isn't needed ..... my little finger just hovers over that arrow & the temptation is just too much.
PS The ambiguity is deliberate, again further cause for interaction which is always fun
Thank you for your comments they are appreciated as always. Dukealien please do not worry, I take all opinions seriously but not in a bad way, I like to hear how people perceive what I have written. If you have an idea on an improvement always feel free to share, if you don't I cannot learn & I love to learn
I will have a look at the poem again later, when I've got my head around it. No excuses but the spelling etc bits are because I type quickly as the phrases come into my mind LOL & then I don't proof read .... very lazy .... it's a habit I need to get out of. I always put my first draft on the site so I can watch how it grows over time. I have a terrible tendency to write my poems really quickly & then just go from there. If I have to think to long & hard about the first attempt I figure that the flow is lost & it ends up being deleted!
I also need to get out of the habit of putting a capital letter at the start of each line when it isn't needed ..... my little finger just hovers over that arrow & the temptation is just too much.
PS The ambiguity is deliberate, again further cause for interaction which is always fun