Version 2: The Need for Sleep

[ClaireLou]

Thank you You cannot be wrong as poetry to me is based upon opinion & we all write, think & see things differently ...... I think thats part of its magic .... I am not a poet professional either, I think its a constant learning process & when people kindly take the time to comment you either go with it or you dont. Its not a criticism its a difference of ideas & differencs of ideas are fun