The Contentment of Creation (True Beauty)

The Contentment of Creation (True Beauty)

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#12

09-16-2017, 01:57 PM

(09-16-2017, 12:09 PM)Yjack123 Wrote: Really don't like the first verse. The rest is pretty good. Some nice images that pull one in a bit. Overall very nice.

Jack, thank you for considering my poem
and for the kind comments.

nibbed

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The Contentment of Creation (True Beauty) - by nibbed - 08-15-2017, 10:57 AM

RE: True Beauty - by Tiger the Lion - 08-15-2017, 12:21 PM

RE: True Beauty - by nibbed - 08-15-2017, 01:44 PM

RE: True Beauty - by milo - 08-16-2017, 07:28 AM

RE: True Beauty - by nibbed - 08-17-2017, 06:36 AM

RE: The Contentment of Creation (True Beauty) - by Todd - 08-18-2017, 11:48 PM

RE: The Contentment of Creation (True Beauty) - by nibbed - 09-14-2017, 06:38 AM

RE: The Contentment of Creation (True Beauty) - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 08-19-2017, 05:13 AM

RE: The Contentment of Creation (True Beauty) - by Achebe - 08-25-2017, 10:18 PM

RE: The Contentment of Creation (True Beauty) - by billy - 09-08-2017, 04:45 PM

RE: The Contentment of Creation (True Beauty) - by Yjack123 - 09-16-2017, 12:09 PM

RE: The Contentment of Creation (True Beauty) - by nibbed - 09-16-2017, 01:57 PM

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