09-16-2017, 11:26 AM
Getting a lot of disceciton, huh? I won't. I thought it was pretty good. Of course there are little things that bugged me. In the beginning you should replace each word "like" with a semi-colon or a period.
"with gentle curvature like praying hands" = " with gentle curvature; praying hands" etc.
But I did really like the pace. Though the words felt a little heavy at the "root" bit.
I think you've put a lot of good work into this. It shows a lot of polish. Nice.
"with gentle curvature like praying hands" = " with gentle curvature; praying hands" etc.
But I did really like the pace. Though the words felt a little heavy at the "root" bit.
I think you've put a lot of good work into this. It shows a lot of polish. Nice.