The Grape Dreams of Wine (revision 2)

[Todd]

I made some adjustments based on the critiques. I fixed the tense and agreed with slashing the and (Mercedes). I fixed the definition issue between song and aria (RN). Keith, I fully get where you're coming from with the close proximity of the internal rhyme. It personally doesn't bother me and I like the sound of it. That said, I did try to make some substitutions but was unhappy with them. I'll let it stand for the moment.

Thank you all.

Todd