09-13-2017, 08:41 AM
That's a wonderful title, sounds Rumi-esque to me - intoxication was a metaphor for being full of the spirit of god. I like the taste of sound, the way the senses stand in for each other, meld.
I wonder why 'mine WAS' when the rest of the verse is in present tense? Also, for me, 'and' in the final line detracts from the impact.
I wonder why 'mine WAS' when the rest of the verse is in present tense? Also, for me, 'and' in the final line detracts from the impact.