First Edit: Wannabe/Death of a Poet

First Edit: Wannabe/Death of a Poet

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09-11-2017, 11:57 PM

I don't understand how the first three lines tie in. They set a path that you immediately stray from with the grotesque balance. I think I would have liked the way you started, the bulk of the divergence felt unoriginal.

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First Edit: Wannabe/Death of a Poet - by Richard - 08-30-2017, 05:22 AM

RE: Wannabe - by Todd - 08-30-2017, 06:50 AM

RE: Wannabe - by roo3471 - 09-24-2017, 01:37 AM

RE: Wannabe - by Richard - 08-30-2017, 11:31 AM

RE: Wannabe - by Yjack123 - 09-11-2017, 11:57 PM

RE: Wannabe - by Keith - 09-12-2017, 08:17 AM

RE: Wannabe - by Richard - 09-12-2017, 11:53 AM

RE: Wannabe - by Richard - 09-27-2017, 11:54 AM

RE: First Edit: Wannabe/Death of a Poet - by Richard - 03-18-2018, 03:49 AM

RE: First Edit: Wannabe/Death of a Poet - by danny_ - 03-24-2018, 09:58 AM

RE: First Edit: Wannabe/Death of a Poet - by Richard - 03-25-2018, 04:07 AM

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