Version 4: A Self Created Soul

[ClaireLou]

Thank you, I really went on to dislike this piece, but with your initial comments as guidance I've gone back to it & tried to be a little more objective. Reading it like it's been written by someone else, if that makes sense. Ps Re Blur ... I wish I could blame my hometown but in all honesty its more that I've probably lost the ability to spell or type or maybe both!