09-01-2017, 07:06 PM
Good Morning!
(You seem to be more of a morning person than me, at least today with a ~4am post.)
I like the poem, after a first quick read. BUT, one thing jumps out: Duracell doesn't use a bunny in its ads; it's the Energizer bunny.
Will have more feedback after some re-reads.
MJW
(You seem to be more of a morning person than me, at least today with a ~4am post.)
I like the poem, after a first quick read. BUT, one thing jumps out: Duracell doesn't use a bunny in its ads; it's the Energizer bunny.
Will have more feedback after some re-reads.
MJW