First Edit: Wannabe/Death of a Poet
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Hey Todd,
That does make sense to me. I noticed the word "like" in there a lot when I typed this up, so it's something I'm going have to tackle. I only wrote this yesterday, so I felt it was still a bit rough the edges, so I greatly appreciate your feedback.

Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.
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Messages In This Thread
First Edit: Wannabe/Death of a Poet - by Richard - 08-30-2017, 05:22 AM
RE: Wannabe - by Todd - 08-30-2017, 06:50 AM
RE: Wannabe - by roo3471 - 09-24-2017, 01:37 AM
RE: Wannabe - by Richard - 08-30-2017, 11:31 AM
RE: Wannabe - by Yjack123 - 09-11-2017, 11:57 PM
RE: Wannabe - by Keith - 09-12-2017, 08:17 AM
RE: Wannabe - by Richard - 09-12-2017, 11:53 AM
RE: Wannabe - by Richard - 09-27-2017, 11:54 AM



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