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Version 2: The Need for Sleep
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08-30-2017, 07:45 AM
Thank you, as it is my first poem on the site I went for something fairly short so I could get some form of idea as to where I needed to improve. I was aware the title was rubbish, I really struggle with them, no idea why, they say the simplist things are sometimes the hardest to create. The last line is a dedication to a poem I love ..... When I am old I shall wear purple .... I will have a think re where I can go with it.
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Version 2: The Need for Sleep - by ClaireLou - 08-29-2017, 09:13 PM
RE: The Need for Sleep - by Todd - 08-29-2017, 10:55 PM
RE: The Need for Sleep - by ClaireLou - 08-30-2017, 07:45 AM
RE: The Need for Sleep - by Richard - 08-30-2017, 11:59 AM
RE: The Need for Sleep - by alonso ramoran - 08-30-2017, 02:11 PM
RE: The Need for Sleep - by ClaireLou - 08-30-2017, 05:53 PM
RE: The Need for Sleep - by mjweise - 08-30-2017, 07:19 PM
RE: The Need for Sleep - by ClaireLou - 08-30-2017, 07:54 PM
RE: The Need for Sleep - by JMannUK - 09-16-2017, 05:40 AM
RE: The Need for Sleep - by ClaireLou - 09-16-2017, 09:12 PM
RE: The Need for Sleep - by nibbed - 09-17-2017, 02:30 AM
RE: The Need for Sleep - by ClaireLou - 09-20-2017, 08:43 PM
RE: The Need for Sleep - by cloud - 09-24-2017, 08:21 AM
RE: The Need for Sleep - by billy - 09-25-2017, 05:08 PM
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