The Caregiver
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Thanks guys. I have a few words and line breaks I might reconsider toying with if I keep this one. It was written quickly and I got excited by the ugliness of it. 
@WJ... apart from the janitorial connection, changing the title to "the caretaker" might be a little too introspectively concise for the N. I'm not sure if he/she is there yet.
Paul
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The Caregiver - by Tiger the Lion - 08-18-2017, 02:23 AM
RE: The Caregiver - by Wjames - 08-18-2017, 03:00 AM
RE: The Caregiver - by Achebe - 08-18-2017, 03:00 AM
RE: The Caregiver - by Tiger the Lion - 08-18-2017, 03:27 PM
RE: The Caregiver - by just mercedes - 08-18-2017, 04:37 PM



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