Self-Shadowed
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(08-13-2017, 07:38 AM)dukealien Wrote:  Self-Shadowed


Descending lamp-lit flagstone steps
on starry nights one stumbles, fearful,
blinded by the drape of one’s own shadow.

Written some time ago, just found in a notebook.

I like this poem. Though I read your PS,
I immediately thought about imagination
and the mind when I read it.

stumbles=imagination gone wild
fearful=such thoughts preventing us from success

The mind can really whip up some scary/negative
thoughts that might prevent us from being
in a better place or doing better things.

It also took on another form as I read it again
before pushing the reply button. Smile

I like how one poem can appear to take on
many meanings.

thanks

nibbed
there's always a better reason to love
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Messages In This Thread
Self-Shadowed - by dukealien - 08-13-2017, 07:38 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by Tiger the Lion - 08-13-2017, 08:18 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by just mercedes - 08-13-2017, 11:05 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by dukealien - 08-13-2017, 11:29 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by nibbed - 08-15-2017, 06:28 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-15-2017, 10:10 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by dukealien - 08-17-2017, 10:30 PM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by RiverNotch - 08-17-2017, 11:03 PM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by dukealien - 08-18-2017, 12:15 PM



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