Hidden in the Poppy Field

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I feel as if this has too many images imposed upon one another and too quickly. I don't feel like I was able to make a complete visual of what you were aiming for and as a result, I dont get as much of a feeling out of it and it feels disjointed.

thank you kindly, alexorande and Andurian
you both are absolutely right.
I made a final revision considering
your critiques

have a blessed day

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