08-13-2017, 11:05 AM
I really like this. It's an encapsualtion of a moment - I really think it would be better in first person. More immediate. Maybe I'd leave out 'own' too.
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Self-Shadowed - by dukealien - 08-13-2017, 07:38 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by Tiger the Lion - 08-13-2017, 08:18 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by just mercedes - 08-13-2017, 11:05 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by dukealien - 08-13-2017, 11:29 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by nibbed - 08-15-2017, 06:28 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-15-2017, 10:10 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by dukealien - 08-17-2017, 10:30 PM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by RiverNotch - 08-17-2017, 11:03 PM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by dukealien - 08-18-2017, 12:15 PM
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