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Self-Shadowed

Self-Shadowed
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08-13-2017, 08:18 AM
(08-13-2017, 07:38 AM)dukealien Wrote:  Self-Shadowed


Descending (lamp-lit flagstone steps) wonderful sounds in this section 
on starry nights one stumbles, fearful,
blinded by the drape of one’s own shadow. like the use of drape here.  Thumbsup

Written some time ago, just found in a notebook.
- nice find
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Messages In This Thread
Self-Shadowed - by dukealien - 08-13-2017, 07:38 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by Tiger the Lion - 08-13-2017, 08:18 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by just mercedes - 08-13-2017, 11:05 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by dukealien - 08-13-2017, 11:29 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by nibbed - 08-15-2017, 06:28 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-15-2017, 10:10 AM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by dukealien - 08-17-2017, 10:30 PM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by RiverNotch - 08-17-2017, 11:03 PM
RE: Self-Shadowed - by dukealien - 08-18-2017, 12:15 PM



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