Untangling - edit

[just mercedes]

Hi - the meter can't be faulted, and the iambs rush my reading forward, breathlessly galloping down the lines. I didn't realize your poem didn't rhyme until I got to 'shade'.

I've never before read a poetic description of how to untangle knots, on the physical level, and I like the analogy of the spiritual level, really well done.

Thanks for posting this!