The Gospel According to George Romero (Revision)
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The Gospel According to George Romero (Revision)
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07-30-2017, 07:09 AM
Hey River, thanks for the feedback. I'll reflect on it all while I work on the revision. You make some good points. I honestly didn't notice that one rhyme till you pointed it out. I mostly was thinking about the content on this draft--the rhyme slipped in.
Best, Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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The Gospel According to George Romero (Revision) - by Todd - 07-26-2017, 03:42 AM
RE: The Gospel According to George Romero - by dukealien - 07-26-2017, 11:39 AM
RE: The Gospel According to George Romero - by Todd - 07-27-2017, 01:36 AM
RE: The Gospel According to George Romero - by RiverNotch - 07-29-2017, 03:17 PM
RE: The Gospel According to George Romero - by Todd - 07-30-2017, 07:09 AM
RE: The Gospel According to George Romero - by CRNDLSM - 07-31-2017, 04:35 AM
RE: The Gospel According to George Romero - by Lizzie - 07-31-2017, 06:13 AM
RE: The Gospel According to George Romero - by Todd - 08-01-2017, 12:39 AM
RE: The Gospel According to George Romero (Revision) - by Todd - 08-03-2017, 11:12 AM
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