07-26-2017, 01:19 PM
I don't quite like this, not as much as I do the first one. The wordplay behind "seminal", and the whole hilarious fact that the earlier could be read as an ode to masturbation -- this one lacks the wit of the earlier, and the warmth doesn't translate as warmth for me, the contrast between the hot male and the weak female is a little unsavory, and "loth" is a bit of an undue throwback.

