07-21-2017, 08:16 AM
Hi mult - thanks for reading and commenting. "Delicately" is all unstressed so should be ok meter wise regardless of syllable count. It could be that you're reading it differently.
Likewise, I'd like the reader to pause after "winter", hence the line break.
I'll take a look at the link!
PS - have noted the earlier point about "amble on" being confusing. Have inserted a comma to help things a bit
Likewise, I'd like the reader to pause after "winter", hence the line break.
I'll take a look at the link!
PS - have noted the earlier point about "amble on" being confusing. Have inserted a comma to help things a bit
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe