Fountain of Cheese
#4
it seems like a sad poem,
vulnerable...
like the speaker is forcing
themself to be something
they think might seem
more desirable...
I didn't see how the title
worked at first but,
okay, now I get the title. Smile
there's always a better reason to love
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Fountain of Cheese - by RiverNotch - 07-15-2017, 10:26 PM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by dukealien - 07-16-2017, 06:10 AM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by CRNDLSM - 07-17-2017, 03:38 AM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by nibbed - 07-17-2017, 02:07 PM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by Achebe - 07-17-2017, 05:08 PM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by RiverNotch - 07-19-2017, 02:21 PM



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