The Final Hour

[wordgobbler]

Hi! So, first off I like the title it reminds me of a Stephen king story. It's so rare to see a poem that rhymes now a days. I think people are afraid of sounding childish or not taken seriously but I think it works in your favor in this poem. It ( the rhyming ) doesn't seem forced or awkward it helps with the flow of the poem. This is a really expressive poem that paints rich pictures!! Good job