Fountain of Cheese
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(07-15-2017, 10:26 PM)RiverNotch Wrote:  I found eternal youth
in mangled drafts and lines
to be,

my works you love "mature"
and soonest out of style
like me.
Probably misinterpreting, but brings to mind the eternal search for the lost coin:  once found, no longer interesting.  But maybe there's another...

Once the imperfections stop nagging, the curds become cheese, and the cheese a memory (or just caved away for that book which never seems to come together)... well, there's plenty more cows out there.

Very enjoyable.
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Fountain of Cheese - by RiverNotch - 07-15-2017, 10:26 PM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by dukealien - 07-16-2017, 06:10 AM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by CRNDLSM - 07-17-2017, 03:38 AM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by nibbed - 07-17-2017, 02:07 PM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by Achebe - 07-17-2017, 05:08 PM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by RiverNotch - 07-19-2017, 02:21 PM



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