07-15-2017, 08:59 PM
(07-15-2017, 08:13 AM)Solstice Wrote: Keith, great poem. I liked the word choice, it hides a lot of the imagery in a child's eyes, from being so obvious and defined. It's like the introduction to the kitchen takes a great leap, with no holds barred on safety, until the end of the poem.Welcome to the site Solstice, and thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. this is from a childs eye so im glad that comes across thanks for the feedback Best Keith
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out